Friday, March 20, 2009

55 word final version

Freedom

A gun fires and I cease to breathe. In horror, I can't move.
“Tap-Tap,” they’re after me.
I begin to run. Their footsteps control my hearts frantic rhythm. I turn the corner, nowhere to go but straight. I won’t give up. Eyes shut, I am done. Freedom is victory as I cross the finish line.

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